What would YOU title this?

[Mr. Cream]

I write.

You defeat me

You defeat me

You have no authority

yet you hold it over me

I cant and I wont let you get away!

This time is mine no infraction

You seem to be one who cant read between the lines

Are you out of your mind?

Loose lips sink ships and it seems you been walkin' on water

You slithered through the cracks in conversation

You bleed them dry no hesitation

Like a snake, suffocation

I do not try and fail

Tried and true to what I do

You cant expect much as you don't know such

Dont try to think or speak for me

I am the one who built this

YOU are the one who joined

Never knew you, never cared to

But I played devils advocate

Gave you your moment, you blew it!

This time is mine no substitution

You couldn't see through the vague

You were out of your mind!

Loose lips sink ships and it seems you been claimin' father

Your sly and deviant you found your own solution

And you misused it with ill preparation

Like a thinker without narration

You'll never rise again!

You'll never rise again

Well do i have something new for you

Telling stories hidden with so much euphemism

With knowledge you've no literation

Otherwise you could explain the things you do to a person

I admit you had your bit, your moment, call it what you will

But on atop of my throne again is where i sit so just sit still!

 

[NewsProject]

RE: What would YOU title this?

You defeat me or Never rise again

 

[Mr. Cream]

RE: What would YOU title this?

Thank you for your input.

 

[NewsProject]

RE: What would YOU title this?

You’re welcome!

 

[Mr. Cream]

RE: What would YOU title this?

Well a buddy's band of mine is now working on the song! i will provide more lyrical input with them, maybe even some vocals.

 

[Laifot]

RE: What would YOU title this?

When i read never to rise again i remembered my beloved song from Dark Angel's "Never To Rise Again" talking about false prophets about the apocalypse.

Never To Rise Again i guess it's a cool name