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  • What would YOU title this?

    I write.

    You defeat me

    You defeat me

    You have no authority

    yet you hold it over me

    I cant and I wont let you get away!

    This time is mine no infraction

    You seem to be one who cant read between the lines

    Are you out of your mind?

    Loose lips sink ships and it seems you been walkin' on water

    You slithered through the cracks in conversation

    You bleed them dry no hesitation

    Like a snake, suffocation

    I do not try and fail

    Tried and true to what I do

    You cant expect much as you don't know such

    Dont try to think or speak for me

    I am the one who built this

    YOU are the one who joined

    Never knew you, never cared to

    But I played devils advocate

    Gave you your moment, you blew it!

    This time is mine no substitution

    You couldn't see through the vague

    You were out of your mind!

    Loose lips sink ships and it seems you been claimin' father

    Your sly and deviant you found your own solution

    And you misused it with ill preparation

    Like a thinker without narration

    You'll never rise again!

    You'll never rise again

    Well do i have something new for you

    Telling stories hidden with so much euphemism

    With knowledge you've no literation

    Otherwise you could explain the things you do to a person

    I admit you had your bit, your moment, call it what you will

    But on atop of my throne again is where i sit so just sit still!
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    RE: What would YOU title this?

    You defeat me or Never rise again

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    • #3

      RE: What would YOU title this?

      Thank you for your input.
      https://www.twitch.tv/mr_cr3am and my youtube https://www.youtube.com/creamtvgaming @lord_cream_ctvg twitter, Check them out for awesome content and great giveaways!

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      • #4

        RE: What would YOU title this?

        You’re welcome!

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        • #5

          RE: What would YOU title this?

          Well a buddy's band of mine is now working on the song! i will provide more lyrical input with them, maybe even some vocals.
          https://www.twitch.tv/mr_cr3am and my youtube https://www.youtube.com/creamtvgaming @lord_cream_ctvg twitter, Check them out for awesome content and great giveaways!

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          • #6

            RE: What would YOU title this?

            When i read never to rise again i remembered my beloved song from Dark Angel's "Never To Rise Again" talking about false prophets about the apocalypse.

            Never To Rise Again i guess it's a cool name :P
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